/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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TheBoogie
>https://e621.net/post/index/1/theboogie%20midna
TheCon
>https://e621.net/post/index/1/thecon%20midna
Take a quick look at their Midna b/w poses, extreme angle views which both like to do as well, especially TheBoogie, and general clean linework. Some further critique points: her right hand (viewer's right, her technical left) could be rendered better, the fingers need work, draw in the nails subtley, and softly, the ends of her fingers show more like monster claws, than delicate fingers, also, they should be angled closer to her "member's" base of the shaft, as well as rendering and adding more linework detail in, basic line crease of the finger joints underneath, side and top, you'll have to experiment with that. Also, rendering the "member" in more, if she is circumcised, there would be more detail behind the top of head, as well as a slight gap, and inward, downward, subtle dip, and of shallow folds and wrinkles of skin behind that, as well as some subtle (very subtle), few, and humble veins, and maybe even a small, subtle, soft hole for the urethra opening, as it's a little jarring as is. The lower "sac" gets chicken scratchy at the bottom and unreadable, clean that up, and just make it rounded connecting the whole "sac" as one, giving it a smooth, curved, and bulbous appearance. Her left hand (viewer's left, which would be her technical right) thumb should be corrected, as the thumb is way too high, and at the angle of the hand, should be more partially covered by the foreshortening of the hand before it and pointing down lower, also, her her wrist should be pointing closer to her body, more than away. She is missing just the part of her right shoulder, (viewer right, technical left). As well decreasing a lot the size of her shoulder on the left and the upper arm, and moving the shoulder inward, (viewer left, technical right). Also, render in her stone helmet, the soft lines and curves read more like flesh or plastic that stone.