/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3673622
I don't see anything that stands out to me as off anon, I thought maybe the people did feel as going to another horizon but I threw some lines and if you consider them to be teens or highschoolers at the front then it looks alright. Else the people at the front are kind of diminishing in height quicker than they should. People don't have the same height so it's tricky to judge that as off or not, nonetheless.
But maybe it's something else that is bothering you.