/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4357606
m8 i admire your ambition but its very obvious that figure drawing is above your level. before you try to draw a whole person, i think you need to learn to draw more basic things first. ideally start with spheres cylinders boxes and pyramids, but i understand that is probably very boring, so at least you should just work on constructing heads, and then seperately drawings eyes, hundreds of eyes, noses and mouths. not whole faces yet, just each component, and when you understand how to draw a head, then you can work on putting the facial features on the head, and then do the same for the body. because there is no point in just telling you everything is wrong. i was out with some japanese friends last night. and one of them brought along a friend who doesn't speak japanese. and they kept asking him to repeat words and phrases. and he didn't know where one word starts and the next word ends. if you showed him a character, he would have no idea how to look it up even with a dictionary. he doesn't know enough japanese to use context from the rest of the sentence to try understanding a word he doesn't know. he has no point of reference because he hasn't even learned the basics. So my advice for him was ...yea you can learn some basic greetings and stuff, but really if you want to improve, you have to study the alphabet first. if you know the alphabet at least you'll be able to spell what you are hearing. then you can learn some basic nouns and verbs and grammar. I AM HUNGRY. LET'S HAVE SEX. And you can increase the complexity over time by building on things that you understand. If you can't draw a head, then your face is gonna look weird. So... good luck and have fun. For you... I say peter han dynamic bible, then watch some proko loomis head videos.

>>4328132
the reason yours doesnt look as good is because you didnt construct a round head.