/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Thu Sep 19 00:10:57 2019 No.4122526 [View]
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>>4121299
I will try helping, but i ain't very good to be giving redlines around ( where's based hitokakuposter?), you didn't hide the arms & legs this time, great, the face looks more proportional now, her upper side is ok, her hair just needs a little more rhythm, without the other arm is a little weird too.But godamm, why you highlight her ass and leave it so sad, my dick is disappointed , one foot was very 2D too
the position of the legs is a bit awkward for this pose too, other thing is that your drawing in general feels vry flat, experiment more with construction

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