/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Go ahead; tell me I suck, but tell me why. Trying to go for a classic comic style with flat colors. Inspired by the dot halftone layering available in CS. I just wish I could use anti-aliasing with the dots. I realize there is no background; this was intended as a demonstration of technique and worm's-eye-view perspective. Any feedback is welcome. (I cheated on the pink eyes, using multiple pink hues and white highlights. I simply could not get them to pop at all with the flat+halftone method.)

(Note: I already posted this independently like a newfag and was told to add some noise and simple shape to the background rather than leave it plain.)

Go ahead; tell me I suck, but tell me why. Trying to go for a classic comic style with flat colors. Inspired by the dot halftone layering available in CS. I just wish I could use anti-aliasing with the dots. I realize there is no background; this was intended as a demonstration of technique and worm's-eye-view perspective. Any feedback is welcome. (I cheated on the pink eyes, using multiple pink hues and white highlights. I simply could not get them to pop at all with the flat+halftone method.)