/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4185074
I'm not triggered. I'm slightly amused that this red-pill shit is getting to the younger generations and I'm also intrigued why people are so eager to get into internet fights about this stuff with people.

I'm not gay. I'm not trans. I'm just a normal dude with a girlfriend and shit, but it's really interesting to hear why people are so polarized about this stuff that has absolutely nothing to do with my everyday life...

>>4170321

This is really beautifully done and the shape design is amazing. Good job!

>>4170943

Super flat. The amount of detail is the same over the whole piece and things aren't in perspective. I still like the composition end the edgy in-your-face- feel of the whole thing...

>>4171599

I love the composition but that's all. No focal point and everything is drawn badly.<

>>4171628

Torso should be slightly taller and arms should be slightly longer.

>>4173394

That's just a horrible pose... I don't know what he's even doing! Is he shy or angry or? I dunno. Figure it out! I think it'd be better if he had the arm to our right behind his body since he's not doing anything with it or you have to pose that arm but what ever...

>>4173944

The angles of her face are all wrong and her nose is flat and anatomically unaesthetic. You did a semi decent job on the eyes (even though they're looking in separate directions and I think it works for you piece) but the nose is all fucked and the mask is pointing forwards(?). It's just all fucked. The nose anatomy is all fucked too. If you want me to show how it's fucked you can ask me but I need to go to sleep. I really like the energy on the hands and the way you lay in your strokes. Foreshortening doesn't seem to work on this thing either...

You have some good ideas but do something simpler before you get into this the next time.