/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4205986
>>4207565

Since you're not getting any proper feedback, I'll shoot:

You have some areas that are too dark in the areas that should be part of the light family. I made a quick Cutout filter version of your piece to show this. I know this shit is really hard to control when you're going into areas with a lot of surface deformation but I thought I should point this out.

I also think you should have an even clearer separation between soft and hard edges. The neck is also too long but you know that already.

Anyways, it's a really nice looking study and I think it's pretty impressive what you were able to do with such limited brushes.