/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5131211
Not bad, these look like my gesture drawings when I was starting out. Practice will tighten up a lot of weaknesses, though I suggest not worrying too, too much about the contours and anatomy of the models you're studying. I can tell you're fighting against doing that already but go even further and make sure you really put the action above all those unnecessary curves.
Take a look at pic related from Vilppu's drawing manual. Vilppu makes use of anatomical details like breasts and he really rounds out the hip and stomach regions, but the arms and legs are very gestural since they really need to carry the message of the pose. You're on the right track with your drawings, I can see your process starting to click together, but just be more mindful about the lines you put down.