/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3601385
>>3601384
Thanks a lot for spending some time to write these, I appreciate a lot
About the japanese woman drawing, I liked it a lot when I finished it last week, but after a couple of days I felt like something was weird but couldn't put my finger on it
But yeah, her head doesn't quite look like it belongs in her body
I don't know if the proportions are so wrong or if they all feel a bit strange because of the head, I'll try to fix it digitally and see if the rest comes together as one
But I still have a lot to improve on proportions anyway
I'll try to pay more attention to line weights, it'll certainly help a lot
I always end up drawing very thin lines, but using weight contrast in my favor will certainly make it more vivid
Thanks again for the criticism, I'll keep that in mind
>bonus drawing: quick fun lettering I made one of these days on a bright orange paper
I think I'll make some stickers out of it