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Those are the three main protagonists of an RPG I am making. Let me introduce to you Lornell, Cassia and Max, from the southern parts of the Ausonian Republic. Lornell(19) is a character inspired partially by Don Quixote, a young "Paladin" who like to thinks of himself as an "ultimate Hero", like one of the books and comics he likes to read. Proud of himself to funny degrees, cocky, a perv and probably an "actor". He has usually 3 sword with himself(An Uchigatana, A longsword and a Zweihander), and Is rather tall, big and muscular due to years helping his dad in the mines of their house. Cassia(18) is a young witch in training who is also a student in a mages academy near the town Lornell and Max resides im. She Is usually a conservative and fairly happy girl who doesn't talk much, and her goals for now are just finishing her last year at the academy and become a witch in her region of origin. She's specialized in fire and white magic. The last one Is Max(24), whose full name is "Massenzio". An old friend of Lornell, Max is a professional car mechanic and freelance inventor. He crafter his "gun containers" he always brings with himself outside of his workplace. Despite appearing like a smart dude at first, and in fact being the brain of the trio, he Is secretly quite goofy and campy. He Is also a skilled Marksman, due to his father being an hunter and teching him how to use any sort of gun since he was 12.

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I did, first time trying to play with proportions after watching a video on character design and shapes. How I did?

Tried to do my best after seeing a video regarding character designs and the importance of shapes. Can I get a feedback on the design of all three and in general? I feel like I am improving but everytime I draw them they look like they're drawn in another art style and I don't know if this habit is natural or not. btw those are supposed to be the main characters of a comic/game I want to make in future