/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5166484
>>5166473
oh, if you want my lines for this sort of thing, you can just ask, although i suppose it's a little late. https://i.imgur.com/UCHw5zF.png otherwise, if you select everything and delete the grey, it might help if you then raise the contrast and set it to multiply on top so there are fewer fragments.

colours:
- the airbrush colour is really yellow, but it's fine if you screen it. it's also probably fine if you use a lighter colour and just adjust screen opacity depending on how highlighted you want the area to be. actually, i compared it to the original afterwards and it probably could've used a little more highlighting, but it was okay enough for me to not bother.
- before the highlights step, i chose to select & erase (with a brush) inside the selection from the previous screen layer, because i felt that there was too much glow in certain areas (mostly just above the tits, iirc?). it was just to adjust how much there was, basically.

as for the last few steps, it's just some post-processing/convenient filtering. mostly i do it because it looks nicer, and here i did some extra to help match the source more.
i didn't clip the gaussian layer to the original folder, i just set it to overlay/soft light and put it on top. then i filled the screen with adjustment colours and clipped it to the unmerged drawing folder for lazy adjustments.
here, i posted the layer setup, does this help?
>>5166493
im gladdened to help you in expanding your vocabulary