/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3099932
Eyes are misaligned.
Draw 100 heads from different angles, 100 Rubik's Cubes from various angles, 100 anatomy studies of 0033 tutorials, and 10 minutes of practicing drawing straight lines EVERY DAY. Don't forget to eat 3 meals a day, a banana in the morning is just fine but remember to never run the AC during the summer and winter to strengthen your mind.
In the beginning, you'll wish you were dead but it took me 3 years to get this strong at art. In other words, you need train like hell to the point where your hair falls out. That's the only way to get strong. These new guys who are fooling around with the "talent" and "Loomis is the answer to everything" junk will never make it this far. Top artists became good because they had the ability to change themselves.

>>2817259
Yeah, I feel you man /ic/ is a very shit place but it is an easy way to get critiques... albeit fairly rarely and in differing quality. I do notice that you have some sense of form (I like the cross contour attempt on the arms) but your proportions are still need a little work. Keep in mind even with different head to body proportions that:
Elbows line up with bellow button when arms are straight down,
Wrist lines up with waist or slightly below it, legs are usually as long as the head and torso combined,
Hands are as big as the face, and the length of the feet should fit snugly within the inside length of the forearm.
If that was confusing I'd suggest checking out New Master's Academy on Youtube or Fantastic Anatomy(who basically steals their information anyway) and use 4chan only for people to critique whether or not you did the techniques in the videos correct or not. Ignore the trolls who say symbol drawing and Loomis and practice hard. Deeds not words!