/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4099948
I scrapped the more spooky face.
Her forehead is supposed to actually come foreword a bit which is why it's so huge. Her jaw is too big to make her more monster-y but does it seem wrong for more than just size?
I realize that trying to teach myself the tricky bits of anatomy and doing finished pieces at the same time was retarded so I've just been focusing on learning rendering. I'll lean on stiffer poses and simpler shapes for a while.

(I'll redraw the hands on this pic)