/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7172387
>but the major problems are that it is difficult to tell who is talking sometimes, and sometimes what order the text is to be read in.
I'm 85% sure that i can fix that with the speech bubbles and relocating the text better
The thing is that i don't know if everything just feel off and is wrong or if are just some parts, being in this loop of either rewriting everything or just correct some parts (which reading more slowly and with patience while editing i have been able to spot more and more mistakes)

For know, now with the grammar checked by the quillbot, i will focus on the text that was highlighted for suggestions

Alright i was putting text in a page and i didn't have any problem seeing a lot of layers, but then i miss clicked undet that text and i could write in that same layer, so do people use a lot of layers or simply one for the text?