/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4756794
push lighting more, she's outside in bright summer light but it looks like she's in low lighting.
rendering technique is good but anatomy and perspective are bad, especially from the shoulders down; the rotation of her left (our right) arm is inconsistent and she has fuckin huge triceps lol. perspective on the cup is inconsistent with itself and the hand holding it. ( you'd only be able to see the cup at such a perspective if taken close up or with an extremely wide-angle lense) nose and lips totally flat. havent even tried with the ear and the piercing is way too high. background is tilted right but she isn't, meaning she would have to be leaning quite far to the side.
imo you've put a lot of effort into making pretty rendering but the fundamentals aren't there.
this is a very good base imho but you've been too hasty with the setup and jumped into the meticulous rendering stage before anything was properly set up.
here is a very brief push on the highlights on a couple spots.
i know it sounds picky but i think you have what could have been a really good pic here, there's no point going back at this point but keep this stuff in mind before going into rendering on your next piece