/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4468448
if it looks stiff then the best way to solve that is practising more fluid drawing, gesture exercises are for that, try seeing videos of people doing gesture drawing and try and apply it to everything you want to draw, its easier to exagerrate then pull back a bit than to be afraid of messing up and being lifeless

what made me less stiff is watching vilppu and seeing the force figure drawing book, both available here on /ic/ threads, and apply same fluidity to everyhting with time you get more accurate and get the right line down without being stiff

and yes i enjoy this one a little better

just keep at it, dont worry about getting it "right", literally push the pose even to extreme then reel it back in, the stiffness comes from that, being afraid of "going even further beyond" Goku did it, why cant you?
hope i helped somehow