/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3028427
parallel lines is not perspective
>https://androidarts.com/art_tut.htm#perspective_and_construction

>>1762882
well fuck me i dont think ill be a big help with that picture
my first desperate approach would be to check the anatomy: even if you hadnt noticed the perspective is off (for example with her left leg) one can notice it that way

for the slim chance you dont know this site already: posemaniacs has 3d figures from different angles which you can rotate. cant harm to practice with them

i take it you draw figures more intuitively rather than constructive?
i see you have lines for vanishing points but i cant see how you used them for her figure
try to construct the human body very stiff and frontal view inside a box. mark where the hipbones, shoulders, knees (everything you use to construct) are in relation to the box around it.
then draw that box in perspective and use the marks to construct the previous figure in perspective
taking this from a stiff pose to something as dynamic as your picture will be a major pain in the ass i guess

pic related (taken from the psg art tutorial)