/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Headake:
Bigger canvas, smaller brush size. Turn that sketch into a proper drawing. You're wasting an opportunity to study the details.

Jeremias:
Draw through those heads, don't just copy the outlines. Project construction on the paper. Do everything you can to make the lines suggest 3D forms.

Merumera:
Double check the body proportions, you slip here and there. Introduce a proper lightsource and try to be more mindful of line weight, so that your drawings get more readable.

TekkyJSKURT:
Flip your drawings, never skip construction, always draw guidelines and stick to them, stop drawing flat front-facing poses. Boxes first, shit on top/inside. You can do much better than this, just stop being lazy and trying to skip steps.

Moirem:
My poor cebula baby, I hope you have some art friends outside of /ic/. This is a sad place full of sad people.
Study asaro head to get a better understanding of the planes of the head. Do some proper portrait color studies. Still lives look much better when done in daylight. Paint some copies of your fav digital paintings, it'll help you see what's missing in your attempts. Wish you the best of luck.