/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3668956
Not even /beg/, so take it for what it's worth
The problem with your fist image is that the focus is on his face/knuckles, but it doesn't look like a face or knuckles. I'd post that picture of the cringing mummy, as a comparison, but fuck that thing.
I think the problem is the outline beneath the brows- the tear lines (?) are very thick and make it look like its own structure

>>3668957
I do not understand what this is depicting. I think it is either a barbarian warrior with a metal helmet or a figure in a robe looking trepid. If it is, the branch in his arm throws off the arms outline, and the vertical line above his index finger seems to be both his nose and the edge of the robe. The eye blotch seems like it should be shaped along the contours of a nose along the bottom side. I also believe he should have less lines on his body-like I said, first thing I thought of was muscles

>>3668958
It wouldn't match the style of the others but more bottles, for depth? I *would* also say do the inside of his eye with grey, but I'm not sure if that is actually a problem. I also think you should do something about his right wrist

>>3668959
No clue, sorry