/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4107802
Not sure myself but I am inclined to agree with what >>4107815 says.

About your actual work, (take it with a grain of salt, this is from /beg/ to /beg/,)
I think the general proportions seem to be fine, though the figures right arm might be a little far away from he torso and not properly attached from this perspective if you visualize the figure without that shoulderpad. Move it a little closer next time. The characters left thigh also attaches a little weirdly, connect the upper part of it to the pelvis properly next time so they edge doesn't look like it's sticking out.

Concerning the lines, they are a little muddy and have too inconsistent thickness. The black contour lines don't properly connect like with the characters left thigh, right hand and left elbow, as well as the neck. With you are gonna have a black outline go all the way and don't leave out parts like elbow and neck.

Also, give the hand more detail and try to draw the knuckles properly. You have to start drawing them someday, better start early than late.