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Anonymous Wed Nov 14 05:09:49 2018 No.3678282 [View]
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>>3678209
Perspective is off between the bed and the floor I tried to correct it a bit here. Shading is still lacking, you did a lot of work on the boobs but lower body needs to have shading too. I tilted the legs and the pussy to the right a bit.

As>>3678220 mentioned the dick looks like it is coming out of the poor guy's nipple (I mean, if that is your fetish go for it I guess), I get that you want to show off the porn area but it is better if you make him have a chest at least.

Otherwise well done keep improving.

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