/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4143148
>he
nope! Also it was only an example of how they could make the story read better.

>>4143137
I like where you went with this, the image is much more appealing and the ring looks less out of place

>>4143361
If you wanted to make the colours a bit more realistic you could use some more colour theory. If you look at the cubes at the bottom of the image the two planes of the cubes with arrows pointed to them are the same tone because they are both the same value of pure grey. The tone appears blue or red depending on all the other tones of the image. where the tones are around the same hue, more desaturated tones or grey tones in the image should appear as the colour on the other side of the colour wheel (complimentary colours) e.g green vs red, and in yours blue vs orange.