/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7074567

You have some placement issues in some of these. Most noticeably in the necks. You're moving it too far back from the pit of the clavicles. Most of your drawing is fine, I quite like the shape and overall feel of the breasts. The other problems I have with it are the placement of the breast furthest from us, her arm and the stomach.

First, that breast isn't quite hanging from the ribcage, it should be closer to her torso. This isn't a torpedo breast issue either considering raita always has the lower portion of the breast swoop back into the torso.

The arm you drew has a bit of an awkward structure to it. You've over emphasized the medial epicondyle of the humerus, this stops my eye movement briefly at that point rather than continuing down the flow of the arm. Look at some of Keane's Tarzan drawings, observe the variety of straight and curves making the arm's contour more interesting to follow.

The stomach is a difficult connection to draw. From the belly button downward, there 2 mounds, one above the abdominals and another by the crotch. This cause a curve, then a straight into another curve (outlined in blue).