/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4164937
Yenno, for all its remaining flaws, this has really come a long way. Good work, bro!

If you'd like to touch it up further, here's a couple things you can try (and feel free to discard, because some of these suggestions remove some of your unique style, so yenno take it all with a grain of salt).

So I made some changes in literally paint, using a mouse, so yenno, that's what we're looking at here. But I made the shoulders and hips a little less sharp and pointy. Also, the clavicle/collar bone is very sharply defined here, so I made it less of a harsh contrast. These things could be considered stylizations, so I dunno, keep em or ditch em, the suggestion is out there.

A couple things that SHOULD be changed though - the breasts are different sizes, and that's a tragedy because we had an opportunity for bigger tiddies and we didn't take it. I made the one closest to us a little larger to match the other (remember, it's also the closer one, so a little bigger than the other is fine, but smaller is bad).

Also, the hip alignment seemed off. I tried to preserve some level of tilt on the hips, but by how the legs are going, that kind of tilt didn't seem justified. So lowering her right (our left) hip seems to line things up better.

Also, remember, at least her posture seems to suggest that her left (our right) leg is closer. It should be slightly bigger than, or at least not smaller than the other leg, and where the two intersect, we can have a dominance of one leg over the other. Don't be afraid to show that, and even cut out parts that you might be proud of or enjoy drawing, like that crotch area where all the planes intersect. It's cool! But it doesn't serve our purposes here.

Finally, the feet seem on the thicker side, so I just squashed them down a bit.

Again, you have a distinct style, so feel free to toss out any of these suggestions, I'd consider you a better artist than myself already, but there here just for your consideration.