/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6167233
Okay. I remember.
I think you should focus on an actual story. Your current comic lacks any kind of story and is more so a breakdown of a character. You can make the story simple, for example the main character isn't actually paranoid but is facing a real threat in his mind. You can have his friend be the one pulling the strings, making sure he never realizes the truth. Basic ideas like that can make your story in to a proper story.

My current comic I'm working on and off on has the simple plot of a loser main character wanting to prove that he is worthwhile.
>picrel