/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2672940
I think the two most noteable flaws in this is

-the eyes are too close together, the eye on our right (her left eye) needs to be a bit further out.

-The line/shadow defining her chin is much too straight and over defined. It should show the soft curve of her chin by both having softer edges to the shadows (like shading a ball) and following the curve of the chin.

>>2665211
>3.53 MB, 2448x3264
Next time resize your picture.
Also this: >>2665224. Not everywhere, but in some places (like on the nose) you should make more gradual transitions.

>>2641122
not bad, only minor gripe i have is the fairly consistent lineweight throughout the contour, lines facing light can be lighter and lines in shadow can be darker (lost/found). Also most of the lines are like the same size, sometimes alternating can be helpful with detail on some parts of the body (or maybe that's just me)

>>2497457

>>2468872
having such a hard line between the light and shadow gives the impression of a flat plane/edge which looks a little strange on the nose/chin. Also unless she's wearing a headband, the end of those bangs needs to be broken up into a hair texture, even a straight cut isn't perfectly flat.

>>2455084
I think you might want to lighten up your value transitions on the cheek. When highlight and shadow get too close, it can cause the planes to look flatter. Easing up the transition would round it.

>>2442489
the way the highlight and shadow meet on her right cheek give the impression of flat, not rounded planes. So basically it looks like that ass is coming to a point.

>>2422657
I feel that your shading isnt really following the planes of the face, just hugging the edges of your linework.

>>2035891