/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6495776
Compositionally this is pretty based and the values are good at creating depth. Although, as a unity, the image looks good, when I break it down into individual parts it folds pretty badly. Like the other anon’s post >>6498217
you’d benefit from creating using a traditional medium. The tool you used to make the background and some other elements look like they were printed just looks fucked up where two segments of dots meet. Additionally, the little line tool you used in some areas like in the bottom right should either be drawn in or clipped in but the round brush for that intention doesn’t work. Another thing I noticed is that you should have drawn the sun instead of using the airbrush, especially since you didn’t use a fully opaque brush and I can see the dot layer behind the sun. Good work, altogether.