/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>10340382
not any of the previous anons but as a first coord attempt, it's okay; as a coord in general, it's pretty plain and cheapy. I think the most quality and high priced item you have pictured is the Arda wig, which isn't really necessary. this can be kind of a nitpick but often beginners have coords that look like they blew their budget on a main piece and had to scrimp on the accessories and this kind of has that same feeling, except Alice Girl is really cheap too so you don't even have that.

my suggestions would be to get some nicer accessories to elevate this how you can. the hat feels too casual for the dress, so instead go for a veil headdress or hairclip with a veil that has pearls or a cross charm to carry more of those dress details throughout. pic related is one from sweet dreamer/cutiecreator on taobao, they have tons of inexpensive accessories that are often modeled after brand ones so they have a nice look to them imo.
instead of plain white tights, black lace or sheer patterned ones would be more interesting and versatile to use in other coords. personally I just don't like plain tights as legwear, they're such a solid, boring block of color where you can include something like a pattern, print, lace, ruffles, etc as another point of detail. this isn't a rule or anything and just my opinion, but I think it's a nice way to step up an outfit.
lastly include some pieces of jewelry. if you're wearing that blouse with the dress, then you would just needs rings and maybe earrings if you wanted. for rings I like to get one or two nice matching ones specially purchased from an indie brand or what have you, and then plainer ones to use as filler that you can get in a set cheaply.

also make sure you apply black lipstick nicely since it's easy to fuck up.